Petal

Hello,
I’ve had this account for a long time but haven’t used it for a while. I think since high school. But recently I’ve been wanting to write again and have been working on a book so I’d really love to get some feedback. I’m looking for some harsh criticism to help get me out of my slump.
Writers block and depression have been eating me alive. I thought I had just grown tired of writing but writing a whole chapter in one go really makes you think that maybe it was just you.
A few things about me. I’m 23, non-binary, bisexual. I’m a leftist so don’t come here looking for any validation if you voted for Trump or anyone on the right. You won’t get it here.