Kill Me Now

Why are you staring at me?

Just Kill Me now

You already tore my hear out

so Just Kill Me now

go ahead

shoot me in the head

I want to be dead

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

just kill me now and dont stare
you are a fool,tore my heart,and you lose
so go ahead ,aim and shoot
but you lose ,its you who dies
how wonderful ,how the words flow so easy and nice
i really enjoyed these writes..
lovely write..

[An owl on the moon]

Such a fierce pain, so indescribable, at the loss of love, the cutting away of that which we most desire and long for... somehow part of us is lost in the separation... powerful words...

[Tina Kline]

A very angry piece and I think it gets the point across. But maybe you
shouldn't be the one that is dead, how about the other person who
hurt you? Mabye no one should be dead. But I know you can hurt so
bad you want to die.

Tina

[Cdnsurfer]

A sad piece, feeling inadequate after meeting an old love. We all have that to some degree, but you know, everything works out in the end, so long as you learn about yourself each time. You become better with time and heartbreak. I believe you meant {heart} in the 3rd line. Strong, emotional piece. Cheers! Rob

[__Flaw__]

There's always room for improvement, even in relationships...world's full of variety and choice. Don't ruin it yet.
Nice effort. Carry on. Cheers :)

[Michael Swift]

Mmmm, angry much?

[Antony]

Very powerful statement, in the heat of anger. I hope you didn't mean it.
Antony

[AaronPhobia]

No one wants to be dead .... it is just a feeling people have and then they realize what a wonderful life they have :) you don't need that person who tore your heart out just forget about him or her :) Excellent write just go back and edit it to where Heart has a t on the end loll :)

-Aaron

good write :))

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow it sounds like someone's heart got broken... but if you pick up the pieces you'll see there is so much more out there to live for.