White sand

White sand

A Poem by Jocelin
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I dedicate this poem to my grandmother... we both love the beach :)

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White Sand

 

By: Saphara

 

You walk into the beach,

The sand,

The sun,

Perfection you can't reach,

The land,

The one,

A smile on your face,

The looks,

The smell,

Waves like lace,

Some books,

As well,

You un-pack your things,

The tide,

The sinc,

All the joy it brings,

World wide,

Don't blink,

But when you leave,

The looking,

The sorrow,

Leaving is a pet-peive,

Not cooking,

 See you tomorrow.

 







                -Jeffery

 

© 2012 Jocelin


Author's Note

Jocelin
This is a poem that shows the affection of all beach lovers.
LET'S HEAR IT FOR A DAY AT THE BEACH!!!!!

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I love it it's perfect lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just got home from the beach, you did a good job describing the feeling!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A good flow and format. Easy-read and a good look on summer. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like how you have put this poem together, it makes you wanna head straight away to that beach! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Now I wanna go to the beach.

*thinks of Regular Show*

SUMMERTIME LU-HU-HU-HU-VIN! LUVIN IN THE SUMMERTIME!! GOING TO THE BEACH GONNA DO SOME BEACHY THINGS!

Posted 9 Years Ago


that is really, really good and awesome! I was at the beach today, actually

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 8, 2011
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Jocelin
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