Sad Faced Girl

Wrote this about a young girl that I met who has cancer and is a true inspiration.

I can't stop the tears, they fall like rain,

Depression in running through my head,

I tell myself that everything's going to be ok,

but i can see my life crumbling before my eyes,

These days are an endless struggle,

Wanting to stay hidden away

I fill my lungs up with smoke,

Then all my worries go away

Reviews

[Jewel Chanda]

I fill my lungs up with smoke to be relieved.. but worries comes back again.. my heart feel down at times ...
but I wonder how did you expressed my feeling :)
Hahahaaaa... it seems like that it is not written by you,, it mine...
Very good expression of feeling...
I just loved it like anything...
:)

[Becca C.]

this is a really nice poem. it's honest and so many people can relate to it.

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i find you poem very honest and trully. it s sad ending of something. but on the end is hope. new start new begin . it s nice i like it .