Tell Me Why I'm Crying

I don't know what I'm saying, but i'm saying something;
I'm crying out to tell you something, but i haven't a clue what it is;
My mind is disconnected from my heart;
If only people could read minds, then they wouldn't know;
But if they could just look,  then they would see;
I'm crying from my heart, but minds can't read;
But Eyes can see.

 

My heart knows what I'm thinking, but my mind can't see what I'm feeling.

 

I'm crying out to you, not knowing what I'm saying.
What I'm saying, can't be said in words;
Only in sobs, laughs, looks, and expressions;
And because of that, I don't know what I'm saying.

 

You have to look into my Eyes, and tell me what I'm feeling;
Before I can tell you;
What it is;
That I am saying;
And why I'm crying.

Reviews

[DIANA WILBANKS]

Wow! a poem about hurting and feeling hurt but not knowing what the hurt relates to...love this and I can
also relate to this write...God Bless!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Nice write! :)
Very deep, emotional and intense..
Beautiful indeed!

[Emily B]

Very emotionally emotional. Superbly drawn image of a cry for help.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Kathryn my dear.... amazing poem... I like the emotions that you have expressed in this poem! I think that you are a very talented writer... Welcome to WritersCafe! "My heart knows what I'm thinking, but my mind can't see what I'm feeling." I love this line!