Mr. Hollywood

Well, hello, Mr. Hollywood. Good to see you again.

Do you really think I'm lovely?

What was that? You think my hair smells really good?

Oh, delicious you said. Sorry I didn't catch that

I was too bedazzled by your smile.

That laugh of yours is really something;

It goes great with all the rest of you,

Especially when you're staring at me.

Those hands of yours fit quite nicely

Laced between my palms and fingers.

Oh, please, you're making me blush,

Quit saying how lovely I am.

Oh but please, don't stop telling me

I'm a movie star.

Did anyone ever tell you that those eyes of yours

Are filled with all this charm and seduction?

I'm being seriously serious when I suggest

That we get together sometime

And discuss making this idea I have into a film.

It's a wonderful story about a guy and a girl

That meet and fall in love.

Like all good romance movies

It has a happy ending with a passionate kiss.

Why yes I was inspired.

You won't believe me,

But it's based on us.

Author's Note

A one-sided conversation; you can fill in the blanks yourself
Choose your own adventure

Reviews

[pregnantpoet]

Well, firstly you are a poet in the making. You have a clear theme and you stick to it. Your choice of words is consistent and suitable -- albeit superficial but that is what your poem is about -- superficiality even if it applies to you. You like Mr Hollywood and what he has to offer you but inside you maybe know he wants something to.
Yes, I liked your poem.
As far as repetition of my poem Hedgehog Rites...it was accidental. Trying to load for the first time. Probably pressed Submit too often. I am a Commonwealth Award winning poet and am 64 and male. Best wishes, Kathryn

[Leap]

Oh, this is greatly unique. It reminds me of someone saying it to themselves in a mirror. It created that image for me. I don't know if that's what you were trying for but I mean it as a complement. I love strong imagery that stands out within the 1st line all the way to the last. Puts you there or wherever your mind takes you and sticks you there. I enjoy the sassy feel of it too - if that makes any sense.
Very cool.

[writer12]

Glamorous, film noir feel. Great job of building setting and drawing us in.

[Kelley]

This was funny Kathryn and you could picture the whole
thing in your head.......smiles
Hollyweird LOL
Thanks for sharing

Kelley