Rain

Platter of rain against the

metal roof, she lies upon her back,

ears open to 

the teardrops of the sky.

Reviews

[Tom]

Nothing like the pitter patter sound of falling rain drops to induce a soporific state of mind!

Imaginatively creative in so few words, splendid indeed !

[Katho28]

Thanks Tom :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You have said so much in just a few words here. The imagery is vivid...not only could I picture the scene, I could almost hear the raindrops. Excellent. Lydi**

[Katho28]

Thanks Lydi, your comment has made my day :)