hate it all

i wrote it on my hand today.

Dead life keeps dying

Broken hearts keep breaking

Hateful people keep hating

Loving angels keep falling

Let them die where they fall

Then rip their dead hearts out of their rotting carcass

Then crush it so it can never beat again

Author's Note

I know its short but it was on my hand and this is what i cam up with in like 2 minutes

Reviews

[Demi Rose]

i especially appreciated this piece because of how it flowed so smoothly. it is short but indeed thoughtful and in a way a ray of hope that gave a great sense of spirituality. beautifully done.