Would Anyone Miss Me?

One of my earliest poems that isn't very good but I like a lot still

Would anyone miss me
If in the dead of night,
The bullet found my temple
And took away my life?

Would anyone really care
If my wrists were cut to shreds,
And death came and took me
Because of all the blood I bled?

Would anyone be shocked
If they found my body ashore?
Would you all be happy
That I was never more?

Would anyone be sorry
If I was truly gone,
If I had killed myself
Because I no longer could go on?

Author's Note

This one I'm not exactly looking for critique on but if you have something that isn't condescending to say please express your views.

Reviews

[astraladvocate]

I like the way the poem flows. It's a pleasure to read despite its subject.
'Cause I couldn't go on' as a last verse would conserve the rhythm better, in my opinion:)
I hope you are happier now. good work ^^