Broken

I place my feet on the grass and pretend to walk on broken glass.

 

My heart is shattered my soul is crushed,

 

Why'd you leave me in the dust?

 

I looked and searched and finally found you,

 

on the ground.

 

Yelling and pleading "STOP THE PAIN!"

 

No one hears me and you're too far away.

 

I take my feet off the grass,

 

For I can not walk on broken glass.

 

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this.
It does have great flow and I honestly think
the line "I place my feet on the grass and pretend to walk on broken glass." is brilliant.
Amazing piece!!!!!
-Elissa :)

[Wildecat]

Good job, I like this poem, keep up the good work.

[Stephanie777]

i love this! its great. ur awesome! :D

[Kayleigh]

Awesome flow to it! Very well written, as well! =)

[Della]

Wow...I have to say...umm...no. Kayla...again with the rhyming and non-rhyming. It's good though. :]

[Ally Baker]

this is a great write, it has a good flow to it,