Brightest Star
A Poem by KazMar
© 2017 KazMar
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Hey, this is very pretty. Your first stanza flows very nicely and you set a tone for the meter to come in the following stanzas. However, you lose the meter you set in the first stanza. Other than that, great work :)
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Added on June 12, 2017
Last Updated on June 12, 2017
Tags: Grief, love, life
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KazMarAustralia
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Being creative allows me to construct or describe the world, through my own eyes. It has always been a part of who I am.
There have been times in my life where I've felt disconnected, lost and not k.. more..
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