Finding

Finding

A Poem by LETitBeKnown

All things change.  Nothing seems relevant.  I'm finding reasons to quit. And the weights just sit there.  The more I breathe the more I realize. I'm not awake. The dissipated thrill. Where does this lead me...If not far from myself? I'm freezing....& I don't feel touched...I'm burning still... but desire has never left.

© 2013 LETitBeKnown


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I can't seem to interpret what I see in this piece, though I wish I could, I'm too frazzled right now.
Anyway, I like it. Well done. ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like how this poems straddles the options of life and death. So deep in sadness, but with a light of hope. Thanks for posting, I liked this. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on August 20, 2013
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Tags: desire, reasons, quit, freezing, burning, weights, change, nothing

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LETitBeKnown
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Life is full of flaw. I can accept that. We create ourselves, but people don't see us the way we are. To you; I'm just an external image with a name. If I were to give you an internal piece of me, yo.. more..

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