Regret

she'll never get to read it so it doesn't matter

This is me

This is what you get

Take it or leave it

But don't ever forget 

Times have hurt us

To the extent of going mad

We kind of got through it

 No matter how bad

So now the door is shut

Us, on either side.

Always wondering when

Our worlds will collide

I don't have the answers

I don't know when

But I wait in anticipation

For you to give in

So please for my sake

Give in already 

I'm such a mess

My heart's so heavy

Take me back to the start

You see? (tears)

That was me

Before it all fell apart.

For my part in losing you

I shall forever regret.

Author's Note

When you miss your ex so bad, even Christmas doesn't feel right.

Reviews

[Maskedthoughts]

I love the flow of the poem and it really makes me feel how you felt at the time, good job!

[s y e]

Wow, Kee - this is such an emotional, touching write. I guess we all have days where we miss our ex, it's just life. Keep your chin up.

~ Noodle.

[KeeD]

i dun miss her anymore, i never thought i'd say this about anyone but I truly hate her ><

[s y e]

awwwww, well I guess we all hate our ex, too!

[Purva Pathak]

hope she read :)
as its awsum as usual :)

[KeeD]

she read it and didn't care, thank you though

[Purva Pathak]

Tch....she shud hv been :(

[Sarah Redigan]

♡ breaking

[Eve]

Wonderful write... So truthful and poignant... Wonderfully written..

[BINGBINGBING]

I think this is an amazing poem. how could your ex not get back with you after reading this. shows lots of feelings and it's just written very well. good job :)

[KeeD]

she is pretty amazing, she should read this :)

[Georgiana S]

I like the honesty of the feelings from this piece.

"For my part in losing you
I shall forever regret."

Simple, vivid, sincere...

[KeeD]

:) Thank you for the kind review. Much appreciated.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

very poignant

[PP]

This is a sad piece but but I can see it heading in a positive direction! Relationships go through many phases may be this is one of it. You will get through it..No one can guarantee the end but you will get through it..I loved your words and the sound track! I've a similar piece written called 'Love never disappears it just diverts' check that out when you've got time:))) Lovely are your words:)

[MOON]

Poignant , touching write, breaking off and pain of loss well depicted, lovely flow.

[KeeD]

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.