Regret

Regret

A Poem by KeeD
"

she'll never get to read it so it doesn't matter

"
This is me
This is what you get
Take it or leave it
But don't ever forget 

Times have hurt us
To the extent of going mad
We kind of got through it
 No matter how bad

So now the door is shut
Us, on either side.
Always wondering when
Our worlds will collide

I don't have the answers
I don't know when
But I wait in anticipation
For you to give in

So please for my sake
Give in already 
I'm such a mess
My heart's so heavy

Take me back to the start
You see? (tears)
That was me
Before it all fell apart.

For my part in losing you
I shall forever regret.

© 2012 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
When you miss your ex so bad, even Christmas doesn't feel right.


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I know you have a lot of pain over this Kee, but you're a wonderful spirit and you'll love again, and someone will love you in return the way you deserve, how could they not love you? You are lovely my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Heartbreaks are never easy. But they say that time heals the deepest wounds and I do believe in that. This was sad and thoughtful. Keep writing and stay strong. :) I am sure everything would be okay soon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
Shruti Das

11 Years Ago

:)
That's how I feel about me and my boyfriend right now...we're growing distant...it sucks...thanks for writing, its a beautiful poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
great poem Keegan. well expressed regret and loneliness. sometimes we only realize when it's too late.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
"My hearts so heavy" *heart's

Seems we had similar days. Nothing feels right when you feel empty. Great poem, Keegan.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me. (cheers for the edit, fixed xo)
Wow so sad and honest:/ I'm sorry about your broken heart and I hope you end up with someone (your ex or someone else) who makes you heal and be happy

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

no problem at all
wow

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
N!LoC

11 Years Ago

anytime :-)
I have a really good feeling you'll do fine dear boy. You have a lot to offer. You're a brilliant poet, a caring person and a ninja, what the fook else does a woman need?

Very smart and tender read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
:( Hope the new year will give u a brand new start with someone or ur ex does see what she's missing out on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, means a lot to me.
RoxelanasDream

11 Years Ago

omg... the song u have on ur poem.... it's using nuvole bianche song one of my faves!!!

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Added on December 29, 2012
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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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