Word Play

Play with
words

The way that you
Play
with my heart.

Teasing it, turning it over in
your
fingers.
Like a coin.

Contemplate
The place for
My heart within yours.
Undecidedly.

Am I worthy?
Beautiful?
Flattering?

Do I make you feel
Like you make me
feel?

Play
With the idea
of
Loving me

Like you play with
the words
In my heart..

Word play.

Reviews

[Travis Lawrence]

Again, the line breaks do it for me. Short and snappy and clear, another good write. Though, did you mean to keep i uncapitalized in "Am i worthy?" Just curious, it seemed out of place.

[Mark Pearce]

A rather coy challenge.

Forward, but not aggressive. A nice tone. A nice finish.

[justjenn_2u]

I especially like the closure to this poem. Two simple words - Word Play. Great comparison between the heart and words. I love this! Words are powerful and can break the heart. I totally understand this poem.

[Vera Iconica]

This is an interesting poem. It doesn't really flow for me, but the words and the feeling I get ftrom it are exceptional. So, I pretty much think you did a wonderful job. I hope to see more from you in the future.