a few of the reasons I love you

a few of the reasons I love you

A Poem by Alexzan Marie

I...

talk in asterisks and you

still understand.

When I *sigh*

you always seem

to know exactly why

and you

do those little things,

sometimes nothing at all

and I

fall in love with you

all over again.

 

You

amaze me with your

eyes like the sea

when I look at you and

you look at me

and there are worlds between us but

we are so, so close like

we've been sharing the same soul

the same

mind

since before I was yours and

you were mine

since before I knew who you were

or who I was, for that matter because

I never truly knew me until

I truly knew you and

I love you.

© 2008 Alexzan Marie


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i love how this one shows the full circle of love and how it can complete us. I almost missed this one, but I am lucky I saw it on your page. Love is the best emotion of all emotions and you captured a piece of it here in your writtings. Nicely done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I REALLY like this. It's beautifully written. Especially the way it's laid out on the page. Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautifully written poem. The only minus is that you need a title.
I usually don't read poems without a title, so get to working and come up with
one :) AD

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alexzan Marie
Alexzan Marie

Springfield, MO



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I am a massage therapy student I live in a city with a cat, some pieces of art on my red walls and my red pen and my boyfriend. He finally moved in with me and I couldn't be more excited about it =) I.. more..

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A Poem by Alexzan Marie