‘Waters Dance’

Desire a rushing stream of water🌹

Waters Dance:

Dancing water
Touching deep-
The currents
Running wild-
Waves and ripples
Washing clean
But urging on
Desire-

Flickering fire
Of fantasy-
Flames the
Shores
Engulf-

The tempo
In each rhythm
Set free the
Deepest bliss-

Oh heavenly
Scent of
Frenzy
Flickers-
Where gasping
In each breath

In arching
Aching
Mystery-
The dance it
Slowly ebbs-
The turbulence
Is heaven sent-
With pounding
Aching cries-

Heights reached
In depths so deep-
Emotions explode
And weep-

The swirling
Dance of days
Gone by -
The shores
Washed far and wide

The ebb and flow
Of dancing waters-
The hearts truth
It doth
Know.

Kelly Fagelund Gjersoe
25 February 2018

Reviews

[lightsong]

few are able to grasp this kind of beauty, to feel it, and abound with it... express it, the way You do, bond with it, and bond it with everything around, You have a graceful magical pen, and again I say a loving grateful being, a sensitive heart that draws such crystal clear pieces of magic.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Magic that only angels like you can see- Thankyou for your angelic presence- it’s an homour🌹

[lightsong]

awa! You are a true Angel, thank You*

[McEltic]

A hidden waterfall by a grassy knoll, two birds two bees and a bundle of smiles :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And a wonderful place that is- wouldn’t be anywhere else- Thankyou for your time🌹

[Lydia Shutter]

Passionate and sensual, your words dance on the page. A magical write. Lydi**

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your words- Be need to connect with our emotions to truly feel and to be in love 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

A lover's water dance. A honor thing to see. The sea and dancing lovers. Allowing sea and love to expand to a magic place. We shall know rarely. I liked this poem. You know I love the sea and I love nature. A wonderful place and journey in the amazing poetry dear Kelly.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes a lovers water dance- so soft to touch -I’m glad it made you feel and enjoy🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome dear Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou dear Coyote🌹

[Richard🖌]

Mesmerizing and stirring, Kelly,
The thrust of penetrating imagery, sensationally suggestive, heart-sweeping metaphor writhing and undulating throughout every line and verse virtually embrace the senses in this amazingly enthralling piece.
How powerfully stirring the visions of water are, conveying such effulgently blissful notions … your touch is captivating to imagination's vivid wonder.
I tried selecting a word, a line, a verse, but like rising, falling, flowing water, nothing was separate from all the rest … still, there was a moment of sheer breathlessness:
"In arching
Aching
Mystery-
The dance it
Slowly ebbs-
The turbulence
Is heaven sent-
With pounding
Aching cries-"

What more to say than I love it, Kelly, and thank you most warmly for sharing such a special facet of You✨ ⁓ Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

We can run but we cannot hide the minute we embrace ourselves there’s beauty all around and no stumbling to be found- Thankyou for taking time🌹

[Richard🖌]

Most humbly, yours.

[Chris]

Reminds me of "other" moments - experienced... there is so much behind our eyes that so few ever take the time to ...see.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh and how I love to see into the depths of things unseen without that sight I’d be lost, it excites me and gives me a sense of belonging aching me on for more, oh the total bliss once we arrive at the place of pure intent and grace where love abounds forever more🌹

[Chris]

THAT is part of the Power of being a Poet... and the wonder as well.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Awestruck🌹

[Chris]

Nah... just being real...

[sette]

the flow of water metaphorically expresses a lot of emotions that is the reason why this poem is considered to be a good one.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Such a lovely thing to say, thankyou🌹

[sette]

you are very much welcome