‘Wondering Why’

‘Wondering Why’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Watching life go by🌹

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‘Wondering Why?’

I look to the sky
And
I wonder why

Why

Does my heart
Break
A bit more
Each time
I wonder
Why.

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
16 April 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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I like your work. Very simplistic but carries a great deal of meaning. Some of my works are that way too. I like to write like this.

Sad, but I greatly enjoyed this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou🌹
It is a sad write but I felt the sadness in your words and all I can say is mine comes from missing someone, loving them from afar.. I love how you drew me in and had me feel the sadness with you... beautiful write thank you for sharing it..

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your tender loving heart and I so hope that your sadness changes to gladness and the tw.. read more
Ghost

6 Years Ago

Your welcome and I appreciate you for wishing me well..
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

My dearest pleasure always🌹
I can relate in my own way to this.
I think sometimes it is because we don't like the answer and other times we want an answer so bad either for closure or comprehension. Such a simple question that can get into such depth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Sometimes when you think you have got over the hurdles and it’s plain sailing and everything’s g.. read more
Ana Papaya

6 Years Ago

you are welcome and yes, i could probably talk for hours on the subject. like a child, why is my fa.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Anytime you are welcome I ask lots of questions and share feelings if many journeys travelled- enjoy.. read more
When we look to the sky. Wonder how we came to this place? Hard questions to answer. I believe, we must accept life and celebrate the new days. Make them sweeter and better. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

True and wise words- sometimes not so easy to accept but life goes on- Thankyou 🌹
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are right dear Kelly and you are welcome.
I wish your heart finds peace....all the pain shall pass.... and light will shine... just we need to keep hanging in there...seems like a whole eternity pass through your eyes when we question all that happens isn't it...
Hugss

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

You are so right and I agree- we need to be strong and hold on and believe- this too shall pass- Tha.. read more
because Your heart is precious, beautiful, gentle, loving and sensitive, and it only deserves someone who will treasure it wholly, completely as it is, that's why my special watery friend*

Hugs of Happiness, that will fill Your heart one day, I'm SO sure :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
lightsong

6 Years Ago

Yes, my dearest, that's true... and only those whom are VERY special go through such pain and challe.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

What a wonderful cup of coffee that would be but I’m about to drink a cup and I’ll be thinking .. read more
Such a short word, yet why can consume our thoughts in so many ways, that questioning and wondering cant be seen as a bad thing. Its only when we get caught in the moment of why, that we can find answers to move past wonderiing, into knowing.
I wonder why all the time. I would worry if I didnt.
Keep asking, questioning and learning.
each piece of the jigsaw may be small, but each one fitted into place brings an answer to some part of the bigger picture.
I like this piece. It gives pause to our own hows and whys.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

You are so right and I agree one hundred percent and I have come to know this as well but still the .. read more
That's the nature of it..... don't stop to ask the question, just go for it....... Have a loverly day......Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your understanding- I appreciate 🌹
Neville

6 Years Ago

my pleasure...........N..
You have quite a quandary there.. think i'd avoid asking that question and just watch the clouds romping by and the birds skimming in the thermals. Perhaps? A sadness in your words.. so hope it fades.. soon or shortly.. (You)

Posted 6 Years Ago


emmajoy

6 Years Ago

Asking why, how, where, what and when are essential for learning life and all it holds. But, what i .. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Yes I appreciate and I do live in the now - been a long spiritual journey and we learn much from nat.. read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

How very true. Enjoy your day too..

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