‘Sweetness’

Pure inner sweetness - be true to oneself🌹

‘Sweetness’

Oh sweet soul

Only you know

Where it is

That you should go

Nobody else doth know

Where love lying deep

Not like a sheep

The wretched world

Doth keep

Your spirit searching deep

Oh keep it pure

Don’t let the emptiness

Your heart it lure

Remain the pure

Diamond embossed

Beauty unlost

No matter the cost

Oh love of Devine

No place or no time

Remove from the mind

You the giver of mine

Oh love so Devine

Spirit and heartbeat

Entwine

Sweetness and seduction

Of time

Soul yearning

Desire burning

Sweetness of spirit

Of mine

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
28 May 2018

Reviews

[Neville]

You have composed a lovely poem filled to overflowing with sweetness...and I agree with your authors note completely...If one can not be true to oneself, how can one possibly be true to another..... thank you for sharing.... N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

In truth all trueness is revealed - Thankyou for your understanding and always gentle spirit- I appreciate you stopping and popping in - trust all is well🌹

[Neville]

Bless you Kelly my friend.. yes, all is good & with you I hope... Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes Thankyou go on one day at a time🌹

[lightsong]

This touches me in a special way, reminding me so much of a poem a friend who passed away about a year and a half wrote for me, the title was (sweet soul of mine), though Your words and thoughts are different, but the idea of "pureness" is in both of the poems. when I read Your title I didn't expect to read this. but You surprise me again with a beauty that's rare, intelligence not all can grasp, this is gorgeous dearest Kelly, to keep saving our true essence, unaffected by the hardships and trails, to be willing and able to give love, to give the sweetest of love specially to that one who is able to pour it from our hearts like a flow of honey... I see and feel, love to all, love to the world, and love to the beloved. elegantly gorgeously pure.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh precious heart u bring a lump to my throat- sometimes people bring messages from people who have gone before us and I so hope that that special soul is resting in peace but will always be close to you- yes we alone know what and where and need to know that love no matter what overcomes all and is the most important of all allowing ourselves to know that it’s ok and we can just be who we know how the best is to be not conforming to others wishes and expectations- I was going to call it Sweetest Soul but then changed it???? Love to you🌹