my life

my life

A Poem by Kelso
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this is a poem about my life

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If you take the time to look into my eyes, and see the pain within

you would see the demons i have battled, and the places i have been

 

If you could see where i come from, the past i came from

the times i wish my entire body and mind were numb

 

From who i was to who i am now, there is no common theme

except for a girl, waitin on her long lost dream

 

If i could change my past believe me i would

the things i didnt do, the things i know i should

 

Undescribable misery, incredable sorrow,

decides to contain the pain untill it be morrow

 

That was my old life, that is who i was

untill i took a second, one little pause

 

I looked all around me, and missed who i used to be

i missed the young girl i was, i missed the old me

 

I stopped all the things, that only made me hurt

i forgot about the people who made me fele like dirt

 

I faught to feel this way, i faught to being her back

i told that other girl, she had better run and pack

 

Because the old me was surfacing, i had had enough

the things i ghave been through have only made me tough

 

 

 

© 2010 Kelso


Author's Note

Kelso
PLEASE review.. i like this poem but i want to kno what you think

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wow thats was really good ^^ i cant make my poems rhyme very well lol it also told me a story of someone changing that has had some trouble in the past

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it, keep writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on March 25, 2010
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A Poem by Kelso