Elements of Life

Elements of Life

We have so much but what do we truly need
To lose it all, be left with nothing
Alone and unprotected
Like a flower sprouting from a seed

Everyone takes things for granted
Natural selfishness and a constant need for more,
When you're that seed not intentionally planted
Everyday is a fight down to the core

Exposed to the elements with no protection around,
Terrified and lonely but still holding strong
You wait for the day your stem breaks through the ground
But staying strong is only a question of "For how long?"

Reviews

[Michael X]

an avarage, decent poem, could be alot better, more original in execution. i think the idea is classic and a great one. again. i give a c. but a 100/100 for style.