I'm On My Way

Success

Make your way,

I'm coming through

On my way to the big towns,

Big city lights, brass bands and loving

Can't stop me

It's my destiny,

My Sister told me, she is in Heaven,

I told my family I'd remember them

When I became famous,

and here I come

Author's Note

Becoming famous

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Break boundaries, show strength, always look up, and never look back.

Very well done poem, thought I may add a few words of my own. More on advice on the subject, for the fun of it. Very well written.

[Michael X]

I love this poem, you captured the idea of what it means to walk the line, headed in one direction, up.
becoming famous. there is a stunning depth in essence, the minimal wording is most effective, imo

[fallendemonofmercy]

these are the very first steps to stardom - to know that, no matter what your doing or where your going that you are never ever alone - and believing that you can do anything
very fun and inspiring