idk

idk

A Poem by Kiari Sabon

traped like never befor

in body and mind

lossing what i was

dont know who i am

an astro stuck on one plain

need to find the others

befor i gain anymore pain

only my kind can teach me

but they left me behinde

stuck here in the sands of time

stuck with no one but me me and me

my thoughs go wild with no one to stop them or even answer them

i need to find my place

but there are so many paths

i need my kind or ill be lost here for ever more

© 2011 Kiari Sabon


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yeah im not good at spelling ill fix it soon

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this. I like the feel it leaves when someone finishes reading it. Only criticism I have is the spelling. It stopped the flow of your words for me sometimes, and your words were too interesting to be stopped!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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TJ
what a tragic tale of desolate solitude. beautifully and heart-wrenchingly written

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kiari Sabon
Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY



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