broken

broken

A Poem by Kiari Sabon

broken in and out parts of me fall every where i go im broken yet i have to keep helping others so i never have the time to fix myself so whos going to fix me

© 2011 Kiari Sabon


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Kiari... I saw the other review... may I ask you to visit my "Freefall..." please?... Our poetry is as WE want it. Our words, format, place... each silent scream, each lil cut, the taste of hell and any brimstone we conjure within our flayed being. Broken IS a way of life - for some... it beats empty all to hell.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Kiari... I saw the other review... may I ask you to visit my "Freefall..." please?... Our poetry is as WE want it. Our words, format, place... each silent scream, each lil cut, the taste of hell and any brimstone we conjure within our flayed being. Broken IS a way of life - for some... it beats empty all to hell.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good, but you may want to rearrange it into stanzas. A paragraph isnt a poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kiari Sabon
Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY



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