Dreaming a Dream

Dreaming a Dream

A Poem by Quail
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Its awesome

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My eyes will not open to this blank world

The lock conceals my emotions beyond a sudden blur

Clogging my imagination preventing the brightest ideas

HOLDING!!!!!

Me at the point where X and Y intersect

Crossing the fiery bridge with ice waters below

And as i Cross and began my journey

I notice a man crying one tear that holds ten thousand souls

Visible only to those who replicate this same grief

But in a different way

My hand acts on his own, Quickly reaching for this man I have yet not identified

Contact is instantaneous

The man then raises his head higher with the one tear Descending and says:

WAKE UP!

© 2011 Quail


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This was actually one of my dreams that bothered me because i could never fully grasp the exact meaning of it. It was never really a nightmare, nor a regular dream, but it really did have me thinking for a whole week. In theory though the man is unknown simply because his face was still concealed within a darkness that i couldn't see through, but enjoy and let me know who you all think the man could be

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2011
Last Updated on March 25, 2011

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Quail
Quail

Athens, GA



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A Poem by Quail