She is the dark

She is the dark

A Poem by M.Kilani

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She is the dark where I hide from the sun

She is where I belong

Where unseen is the undone

Where silence is a song

 

She is the dark where I stay awake

Where my nightmares grow old

Where I dream of what I forsake

Where the sun is never cold

 

She is the dark where I never fall asleep

Where I’m always left alone

Where no one hears me weep

Where I await for another dawn

 

She is the dark

Where no sense makes sense

A star upon an ark

And still I can’t confess

That she is the dark

 

© 2010 M.Kilani


Author's Note

M.Kilani
it's still unfinished I was too sleepy to finish it up !! enjoy
Reviews are welcomed .



Reviews

wow, great lyrical quality, depthfully charged theme of darkness,
in many ways creates a vision of the night sky, or a moonless midnight
and written quite clearly in grammar, a fun and polished poem that i'd
easily give a 100 for the way you polished the messege presented
with consistant imagery and tone, awsome job, kep it up.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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