Lost

do you not see what you do to me?
the pain you cause me

where is your hand when i need something to hold on to?
where are you when I need someone to talk to?

do you love me?
or is this all just a game to you?
I feel so lost.
as though I am caught in a jungle
never to be found
abandoned on an island.
never to be heard of again.
I am standing right here. yet you do not see me?
where are you?
where are we?

 

our distant apart getting further.
my pain so plainly for everyone to see
I need you here but I can't find you
Like a blind man trying to find his way
lost amongst this tirade of people
what has become of us?
has the world just played us like a game?
a game that the gods play just to amuse themselves?
toying, playing with out feelings
is this our signal that it is ending?
or is there more to come?
questions question questions and no answers.
where does this lead us to? where does it bring us?

to others we seem so perfect
but only us can tell that there is something missing
something gone
something that was there. yet no more.
where has this something gone?
has it disappeared forever?
or just waiting to be found?

so indecisive. what is there to do?
in these overwhelming thoughts.
reminiscing over cold memories.
where has the love roamed to?

thoughts of giving up fill my mind
yet I can't
i cannot.
I can't give up on something so special.
Something i worked so hard on.

oh lord. someone send me a sign
someone tell me what to do.
feel so lost.
oh so lost.
someone help me.

Reviews

[Enigma]

Wow! A powerful peace.The comparisions are skillfully made and it all just strengthens the message that you're trying to say.The reader gets along with your thoughts and can easily relate to them as if they were her/his own.Nearing the end, the feeling of being lost seets over the reader itself.That's what happened to me.I think it's a great piece!!
Great Poem!!!