Don't Hurt Me

Please don't hurt me

I gave you my heart

Thinking it was safe

Now I know I was wrong

 

I cry and worry all night

Trying to get my answers

It's staring me in the face

I shouldn't have trusted you

 

But it's to late now

What's done is done

I can't escape your grasp

So please please I beg you please

 

Please dont hurt me

I'm not worth the time let me go

Release me from this spell you've cast upon me

And let me fix whats been done

 

Just please please dont hurt me

I left my heart with you thinking I was safe

But I've made a mistakse, jsut let me fix it

All I ask is,  please please dont hurt me

Reviews

[Weaza]

I love reading this over and over I LOVE the meaning ^^ it quietr but at the same time your struggling ^^ srry i just love it!

[bailish]

Your poem rings of desperation, of a struggle against an unknown force for your very survival. Powerful!

"I'm not worth the time"
Wow! This line jumped out at stabbed me in the chest. How dare you think you're not worth the time. Just look at the beauty you've created. No one can ever take away what you've got inside.

The sadness will fade over time, but the writing will continue.

[Enigma]

That was nice. Just a little bit of typos which you can surely fix....
And the whole idea of making a mistake by giving away your 'heart' to somebody is very impressive. You really made me believe that you've done some huge mistake. People shouldn't be trusted/loved blindly. They may end up hurting you....
The flow is great. And so is the whole structure...
I loved it!! Well Done!!!

[Weaza]

I love the poem kitti! ^^ ...its sad at the same time giving a huge meaning. very decriptive.