Let it Rain

Let it Rain

A Poem by Kitty

 

God, please let it rain,
Let it wash away
All this pain;
Let it cleanse my tainted soul,
Let the raindrops
Make me whole.
God, please send the water bucketing down,
Let it wipe away
This ugly frown;
Let it rinse my poor aching heart,
Oh please,
Let the rain start…
 
Copyright©JosieWentzel13September2009

© 2009 Kitty


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This is so profoundly beautiful and expressive. Just loved the imagery and feeling you create with your flowing words. Love the cleansing feel of rain...


Posted 9 Years Ago


it is very simple and straight forward. i would have liked to see a little more vacabulary. that is not needed really but its always nice to have a few big fancy words. although some over do it and just end up confusing everyone with all the metaphors and such.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great job at conveying emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this poem! It has a very nice flow to it. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kitty
Kitty

Weltevredenpark, Johannesburg, South Africa



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