Why??

Why??

A Poem by KittyStarr1101
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Just something...

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Why is it when your friends ask you to stop,
You don't?
But when he ask's you,
You stop automatically.
How can he have that much control over you,
Then just forget you like that?
Why are we so gullible?
Why don't we just treat him like one of our ordinary friends?
Probably because,
We hope he will be with us forever.
Why do we think this?
Cause most of the time,
It won't work out.
Why?
Why can't he love me?

© 2011 KittyStarr1101


Author's Note

KittyStarr1101
Just a reminder, I am always tired when I write so I barely remember anything I write soo.... sorry.

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How true, the fact that sometimes someone that shouldn't has more control over us than best friends. Sad, yes, but sadness often inspires very well-written and inspiring poetry, which fits this case exactly. Well done, keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow I can totally relate to this this is soo sad. Amazing work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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:P Its sad but its really good too. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really good, but it's really sad :/
And even if you are always tierd when you write, it turns out amazing anyways. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago



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KittyStarr1101
KittyStarr1101

Bikini Bottom, IL



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I am 12, quite enjoy writing. I have a Kitty soul so therefore ; I am a kitty. I know what your thinking - but, you look like a human - well I have a Kitty soul trapped in a human body. I attend Churc.. more..

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