Soul my Sweet

Soul my Sweet

A Poem by *^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*

omg I�m such a video game nerd!! XD


I can imagine

This person being real

I can imagine

This person I can feel

I can imagine

This person, though surreal

I can imagine

Cracking open the seal


To his life and world

But, but life can’t afford

To dedicate itself to him

Nope, not on a whim


He isn’t real

He isn’t right

He can’t touch or feel

Never shall he see the light


So, I must move on

My heart should get a rest

He’s just a silly character

In a game with-which I’m obsessed.

© 2008 *^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*

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very nice imaginery . maybe you should move to the game and be real with him

Posted 7 Years Ago

I have a very similar obsession. I think that this is very beautiful, and the fact it's about my favoorite game in the world makes it even better. The only thing I see that's a bit strange is some overuse of vertain phrases, but that's all I see that's a little off. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago

Now that is Poetry Dianne! To write so beautifully and eloquently about a character in a video game, only proves the talent you possess. This is simply stunning. You go girl!...LOL...Hugz...Jillian

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

who doesn't like zelda
personally i love "link 2 the past" the best
great write

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As you can probably tell from my writing, I love lyric poetry. I don't care whether the hero is real or not, it is plain you are a loyal fan, and loyalty is in small supply these days.
Very well conceived and presented. I loved it and will be adding it to my library.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Addiction to a fantasy- how much better it seems, to love what cannot possibly hurt you! But it is more than that, I think. Link, Aragon, Zelda, Arwen-- whether they are in games or stories, heroes call to the best parts of us-- reminding us what it means to be honorable and true. Your videogames, my novels; these characters are defining pieces of our lives, whether that makes us slightly nuts or no!

A beautiful piece of nerdiness you've got here. Write on!

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'm wondering which game it is that got you so obsessed, probably best I don't know I don't have time for another obsession :) I can totally relate to this, thing is these cartoon characters have got real people behind them so it is easy to get attached to them. Nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Interesting i like it but i think u took the rhyme a little over board but im not one to talk although i cant relate i like it good write

Posted 14 Years Ago

4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 5, 2008
Last Updated on February 9, 2008



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I love to write fantasy. My name is Dianne and I live in California. I am what my name says: I love The Legend of Zelda! Link is my sexy love, and Epona is my horsy love! Speaking of which, I love hor.. more..


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