No More Rain

Freedom from demons..

Too many times, too many scars

Too many words from too many places

Too many notions not of my own, too

Many judgments from too many faces

 

Not enough seconds, minutes or hours

Not enough love to receive or to give

Not enough laughter from honest hearts

Not enough freedom to live and let live.

 

Far too few hearts that haven’t been broken

Very few lessons that are actually learned

Even less times pictures of gratitude or

To be able to take a person of their word

 

More and more images of pain and sorrow

Increasing numbers of death and pain

So many new hopes and dreams for tomorrow

In hopes to be free from Mountain Rain.

 

No more rain…..no more pain

Freedom at last… she sighs.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Disturbing emotions expressed so intensely and vividly in this write. Ending a life does not give a person freedom . No, life is not easy and certainly we see hopes and dreams shattered all too often. Still, there are always things about which we can be happy...always reasons to go onward. Well expressed. Lydi**

[Klyn]

Thank you. It is a bit personal...throwing away memories in the french broad river...a prophetic dream trying to tell me of what was to come. So many times we try to ignore red flags given to us, Too many times we are focused on instant gratification, we don't see the big picture of what is really going on around us. We may know deep down, but we push that information deep down trying to ignore the signs and warnings God gave us called "gut feeling" or "intuition" We may KNOW what is up...but try to ignore it anyway only to be slapped upside the head later. The Devil roams free on this earth all around us and we simply invite Him in with open arms......but not without lessons to be learned....very valuable ones and then realize that everything happens for a reason. it may not seem that way at first...the pain is too much. But once the pain wanes and life continues on.....we realize what truly happens. Life is a circle of events and karma truly is a B***H! :) Thanks for reading and commenting. Namaste.

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, what goes around comes around. This is so true.

[Chris]

So many dreams of new beginnings - and for some they are nightmares over the endings. Should I say welcome back?

[Revery]

Reality! Nice. .............

[Adam Adams]

"Not enough seconds, minutes or hours
Not enough love to receive or to give
Not enough laughter from honest hearts
Not enough freedom to live and let live..." Very deep and thoughtful lines.

The world needs peace to be lived with but hardly the ones finds ev'n to put his heart on mend. Everywhere .. anywhere you been just wandering through is became nothing but the waste of goddamn sin. No humanity. No faith. No love. No life and finally, No freedom. Kinda very evocative poetry it is. Liked the depth of your very tender thoughts!

[V. K. Harris]

This is the story of my life, how did you know. Excellent write. Its been so long since I've been here.