Live

Speak to the wind that howls and the water that raves,

Speak to the lonely and to that which braves.

Climb the mountains, shout your name,

Whisper with the forgotten, it's all the same.

A voice is what you need but if without

All you need to do is never doubt.

The world will hear you if you believe,

The world will see you if you achieve.

Run from battle but never fear,

Face it head on and jump the pier.

Raise your fist for what you think,

Don't let the croud pull you in to sink.

Chase the leader until you're in his spot;

Escape the law and don't ever get caught.

 

Reviews

[Mr. Lou]

hmmmm. Good poem, Ms. Kohleen. The rhyme scheme superb as always! But I must say that Ms. Kohleen you can do better. You must allow your imagination to create your words and enhance the experience you speak of! I need to feel exactly what this courage is you speak of! Tell me how I will Pierce through fear's brick walls, as I jump the pier! Think of a poem as a canvas and you must invent ideas like you would with paint! Go! WE ARE GODS ON PAPER! OUR DUTY IS TO CREATE!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

love how this comes together, great flow, well done.

[theweston]

all with her.happiness means more to me then anything material chat.That is lovely to have that special person to talk to and do things in life with each other, a new experience in life with each other and mate spirit, relationships with the right people and build towards a relationship with family,hope for the future is to find my love .

[forevermore1218]

very inspirational!!!!!

[Crazy Cat Man]

a great reminder for us to live and a great picture to go with it.

The world will hear you if you believe,
The world will see you if you achieve.

those 2 are great lines

and i love the last line

Escape the law and don't ever get caught. i love the last line too :) perfect ending

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Annie Oakley has nothing over you, darling daughter of the muse! Take up the shield, the sword and spear... follow your heart toward what is dear. For therein will you find that journeyed hill is worth the climb.

[Enid Blake]

A clear message within a good poem :)

[Persephone]

Again another great work! - I love your rhythm and flow here - you only live once, take the chance :) Thanks for sharing!

[Beck Louise]

Wow, I really like this, its so well written. Nice one :)

[zainul]

I think the poem is intended to inspire the poet herself.
This is also motivational for others.
Like the confidence in her writing.