mails

Mails

 

 

What time is it in U.S?

I am at this side of world

Bowed before roaring sea,

Thousands of miles in between,

My fingers fumble on keys.

 Go ether! Carry my words

To a friend from timeless truth.

 

Waters of same shade currents,

Waves and waves commingles,

Nations obliterate in

The mist of minds sending mails

The truths change accordingly.

 

 

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

You really packed a lot of power and truth in such a short poem.

"Waters of same shade currents,
Waves and waves commingles,
Nations obliterate in
The mist of minds sending mails
The truths change accordingly."

You really have described the world that we live in. Great job with this one.

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

great write! :)

[George Love]

Very interesting take on the electronic age!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

What an intriquing write. It would have been perfect for a contest I ran called 'Message in a Bottle' - this reminds me of words you might place on a page and send off in a bottle across the sea. Great write.
Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha