Decay

Decay

A Poem by Kyle J. Lawson
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Time passes, and cellular breakdown occurs.

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A prism of entropy where chaos sets in
Neglected by time, corroding within
Consumed by rust, falling apart
Wilted and fading, return to start

© 2013 Kyle J. Lawson


Author's Note

Kyle J. Lawson
A short poem about urban decay. Let me know what you like and didn't like about it. And where I can possibly improve. And don't forget to rate it for me. :)

Kyle~

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A very good write about decline. Excellent use of brevity. Good imagery and descriptives in these well crafted rhyming couplets. Just a note, there's a spelling error in line two of the first couplet. Last word should be within. Good word choice. Nice alliteration. Well penned. Write on!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kyle J. Lawson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I don't know how I missed that.



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Fantastic description of the life cycle of decay. If you can make decay sound poetic then, I'd say you got skills. There wasn't anything I didn't like about it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kyle J. Lawson

9 Years Ago

Both death and decay can be beautiful with the right words. Even darkness its self can be described .. read more
Krystle Lewallen

9 Years Ago

I wouldn't call you strange for taking something otherwise ugly and making it beautiful, just talen.. read more
Kyle J. Lawson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I have no idea where I got the inspiration for this though. Just popped out of nowhere.
A very good write about decline. Excellent use of brevity. Good imagery and descriptives in these well crafted rhyming couplets. Just a note, there's a spelling error in line two of the first couplet. Last word should be within. Good word choice. Nice alliteration. Well penned. Write on!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kyle J. Lawson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I don't know how I missed that.
A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing this short poem but a good one...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kyle J. Lawson

9 Years Ago

Thanks man!
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Kyle J. Lawson
Kyle J. Lawson

Greenwood, IN



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Greetings everyone, I'm Kyle. I've recently gotten into writing within the past three years and love doing it. I'm always looking for ways to improve, since I'm nowhere near good or great in any shape.. more..

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