Falling down

Falling down

into a pit of flames

looking up

at the angels

 

Angels flying

through the clouds

dancing around

the rays of light

 

Sitting down

in the ground

surrounded by dirt

covered in bugs

 

falling down

nothing left to lose

lost everthing

dear to her

 

She's high on misery

drunk on her own pain

afraid to try

afraid to succed

 

She's falling down

into the pits of hell

looking up at the angels

wishing she could be them

 

She's so far down

she thinks she's good for nothing

but she's so much more

then she believes she is

 

She's an angel

hiding behind the pain

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Great job

[hardscoper6]

An awesome poem! It just fits together so well! I really like this one, keep up the good work!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Starlit Dhrub]

she's an angel hiding behind the pain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it did it all for me!!!!!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Starlit Dhrub]

welcome