I thought about you today

i thought about you today 

when i was out in the cold. 

i know that if you were there 

i would have been in your arms 

warm and cozy. 

 

i thought about you today

when i was in a crowd of people

and yet i still felt all alone.

i never knew that could happen 

until i met you.

i thought love was just a legend. 

Author's Note

this is what happens when i cant talk to you for a couple of days and im bored during science! hahaha :P

Reviews

[c.m.]

This is such a cute poem. Amazing how much love can be shown in such few words. Very nice.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this poem. :) it made me smile because it is cute.

[Stephen Scaggs]

Dear Writer,

A good poem indeed. I like this versus a lot of your poems, and I'm sorry I don't get around to talking to you anymore. Short poems are my love, my passion, my adoration. You need to use capital letters to emphasize letters and clean it up. Good imagery and very realisticly concise with normal events of an average day; but I think you can always work on adding some Rhyme and Repetition. Like the stanza work.

If you want me to proofread your poems, just give me a message and I'll get to them. I'm an regular editor, so I often write, read, and make books. Good flow. A lot of good notable things that I've yet to say.

Keep it up! 9.1/10.

A Friend,
S. W. Scaggs