loverly

you asked me and i said yes

now you are so sweet to me

i hope everyone can see your greatness

now im just hoping that

i dont end up with my heart broken

and you dont come to the same ending as he did

he broke me and you know that

please never make me go through that again

Reviews

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanks i was trying to make a piont

[zappy]

this is a very powerful poem

[Nathan Durham]

Very powerful. Plenty of good emotion, and it had a nice flow as well. You are a talented writer.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. Great write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Kaelyn Shea]

yup

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

ooooh ok :)

[Kaelyn Shea]

im not ashamed shes just taking a while to answer right nnow

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

well ask her, dont be ashamed :)

[Kaelyn Shea]

i dont know i habe nt asked her

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

wow, sounds like you two are preety close then. i hope she approves of me