Best Friends

Best Friends

A Poem by Manda
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We were best friends, but soon became lovers

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I miss you
Because I can't see you

I love you
Because I can't have you

You were my best friend
But now....

You're the love of my life


© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
This is just something I am going through right now. And its really hard to explain but it is really happening.

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Awwww . . . I think every girl/guy has had a girl/guy best friend that they fell in love with or had them fall in love with them. I went out with my best friend for a whole year before my family moved away and I really love the simplicity of this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


simple but hits the nail on the head.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I swear we have to be going through the same thing... This is exactly what happened to me but now its a little switched around... Back to the point though this poem explains itself in so few words. It's just so perfect. Very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


strange how this happens sometimes. Great short poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Uncomplicated, simple and to the point, beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Simple Formation, simple poem. Big message, Love can conquer all, indeed a beautiful write.

Keep writing, always
indie♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love how simple this all seems to the eye and yet the meaning is so deep and real. Very beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes. I can relate to this poem. My friendship turned into love... But then it didn't work out well... So we toke our different ways... Nicely done... beautiful Write.. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


DAMN, I HATE when this crap happens! You start out as friends, then become best friends but then your mind seems to find them damn sexy and your feelings change for them and then you don't know whether they feel the same and you stay awake at night wondering if they know you like them or if they like you........nasty cycle that is. I TOTALLY understand what you're going through, hopefully you won't get rejected or anything, my sympathies if you do. It's short but def. has a deeper meaning to it, especially if someone's gone through the same situation. Good Luck hun :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


the love of your life best friends, I like it. good one.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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