~*For Victor*~

This was cheesey poem to learn about clichés for my English class. I wrote mine for my online stalker Victor my imaginary true love and my only true hate.Messege me for more details if you are curious

If our love were a flower

I’d pull it apart

If I had the power

This would never start

But I love you so much

I could never say no

They can say what they like

I don’t care you’re a hoe

Author's Note

This was just for fun. I realize that it is not anything artful or absolutely fantastic. I am only posting this because it amuses me and many of my friends who know of my troubles with this guy and we all laugh because we know it’s true. Feel free to say what ever you like about this though I do like opinions.

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Short cute and beautiful lines.. so sweet like honey...

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

This is a great poem I liked reading it.

[Priscilla Sayers]

And fun it was but still there was passion peeking in between the lines:)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love this poem ...the being with the flower was beautiful and the end just made me laugh ... :D!!!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice write!

[taylorrose]

wow i think its good very good

[Everson Taveras]

haha "I don’t care you’re a hoe" What a heart warming way to address the person you love. The opening stanzas were exquisite; and at the end, they just went sour with true grit and humor. Thank you for sharing

[The fallen of innocence]

extremely funny, i especially love the ending. good job with this poem and keep writing

[Brandi Nicole]

i actually like it. it is humorous, but real. sometimes, all we can do is laugh at ourselves....at our situations.

[Dove]

The flower part was nice and the last line literally made me laugh out loud because i was expecting it. Good poem