Miles Away

you ask where I go

when I get that

far away look in my eyes

and I really have

no answer to give you

I just know

that each time I travel

another mile

comes between us

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

and once that starts, it spells the end.

because there is a reason or reasons for the travel...and it/they are not good.

communication is the key in a relationship, as this poem so well expresses...and when that is gone...
pack the bags.

i've gone there, and been with partners who have gone there...my current partner and i have vowed, we will not go there...we will communicate, or else.

like the conciseness of this.

jacob

jacob

[Ken Simm.]

Poignant and so evocative of feeling. A lovely piece that is complete in and of itself and its story.