My-Ku  Pleasure

My-Ku Pleasure

A Poem by LA Lorena

shudder and tremor

climactic waves grip you home

to hot molten release

 

© 2013 LA Lorena


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wow.....volcanic! s**t! s**t! s**t! my pants are on fire!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


ooh! Delicious!

Posted 11 Years Ago


what a sensual senryu... I thought only guys were quick to climax.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. If only you all were that quick!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

who said anything about quick? ;)
this sounds like hot lava sex in a land body, a geography ode to pleasure..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love these quickies.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahahaha, touche! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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LA Lorena
LA Lorena

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Hello, I'm known as LA or LL. I am a bit of an enigma, but I like it that way. I'm on a bit of a hiatus from the site for now, as life has gotten a little busy, but I shall return. more..

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