Break-Neck

More of a darker poem - again. One day I'll write something light and happy... one day.

Stunning left handed remarks
Leave once joyfull parties awkward
As questions thicken the air,
And all thoughts of getting lucky vanish.
Funny how one comment leads to division
And funner yet at how easily amused I am.
Impassable barriers seperate the mind from the world,
Yet all walls have weak points -
Care to test your defenses?

Author's Note

Is it clear at all?

Reviews

[Anon]

Yes, it is very clear. And yes, I like it.