Joyful Mourning

Meh, I like this one, hopefully you do as well.

Tears mingle with sweat
And fears as emotions well
Over those firmly set boundries
That divide the soul from the world.
Watch as they fall appart before your eyes
And sorrow becomes all
They see. Help passes by
Without a second thought. Why
Is the world so cold? Let's leave now
Before emotions never ment to mingle create
Anger.

Author's Note

Be harsh! Critic with all your heart.