Spiders

Spiders

A Poem by Lacuna Badtz
"

Waiting and watching the cobwebs form.

"

Eyelashes, like spider legs.

I feel them creeping across my eyelids

as my head starts to droop, without a speck of grace.

A shot of awareness smacks me across the face.

I cannot fall asleep just yet.


The glass of wine

safety pinned to my hand

would fall to the floor and stain.

The spilt red mess, like blood,

would make this room resemble

a murder scene;

not like it didn't already

reek of something grim.


I place my glass upon a web covered table.

Uncross my fishnet kissed legs and

stumble to the stairs.

I look upon the messy hair

that covers your drooling face.

I will leave you passed out

upon your basement floor.


I will let you waste

amongst the dancing spiders

who decorate the boxes upon boxes

that hoard your living space.

You said you were leaving.

You said you were coming.

I am heading off to bed

to sleep alone. 

© 2014 Lacuna Badtz


Author's Note

Lacuna Badtz
Please let me know what you think. If you leave me a review I will review one of your poems. Thanks, xo.

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Well structured and good imagery

Posted 6 Years Ago


I cant help but feel that you wrote this at the moment it happened. You write from the heart, mind, and soul. I feel your neglection, and sympathize with it. Great job, as always...

Posted 6 Years Ago


I cant help but think of some Halloween party had taken place! But also see a worthless lover who is messy and neglectful, drunk and wasted on the couch lol love the imagery!

Posted 6 Years Ago


A very interesting poem on cobwebs. Thank you for sharing...:)..............................

Posted 6 Years Ago


I don't write poetry but I really liked this one. Very mysterious.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really like this, this has a good sense that these two were in a relationship and she is better of to handle her liquor rather then them, but it almost seems sweet and misunderstood, I really like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I loved it and the great metaphors you used:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Great job, spiders may be dangerous but there sexy full of colors:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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6 Years Ago

Did I say style or smile he he maybe both, Yes your a great writer and the smile is amazing at that:.. read more
Lacuna Badtz

6 Years Ago

aw thank you for both comments :) you're very kind
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6 Years Ago

Well I am me I tell all and your very welcome:)

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Lacuna Badtz
Lacuna Badtz

Malta, IL



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Hello My name is Lacuna. I have lived my life in the Burbs of Chicago but have recently relocated to the country. It's taking some getting used to but at least I have more time for my hobbies (Poetry,.. more..

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