Keep on

I keep coming back like it’s where I belong

I keep humming like your serenity is my song

I keep breathing you and exhaling feels wrong

So keep me here and I’ll keep on keeping on..

Reviews

[K. Louis]

"I keep breathing you and exhaling feels wrong" -- That's a beautiful line...

[Lamis]

Thank you so much for your review K. Louis :))))) I'm glad you liked it!

[K. Louis]

You're welcome!

[zainul]

Please keep on,dear friend.:)
You are meant to be here.
You are not doing any wrong.

[Lamis]

I am very excessively flattered. Thank you :)

[zainul]

You are very much welcome,dear friend.

[Arsalan Kouser]

I like this poem...it feels to me that one person just enjoys being in the presence of another person so much, that they can't live on without them. It almost feels like a poem of love, but I might be wrong XD

[Lamis]

You're right it is a love poem :) Thank you for your comment Arsalan.