You can never tell.

This is a story about you and me
The truth that everybody will see
Yes, i'm happy to be finally free
To tell the lies, and there were three:

FIRST

That you are my angel and the only knight
Which will fight for me in every fight

SECOND

That you will stay with me like a guardian of light
And protect me with all of your knight's might

THIRD

That forever together are not just words
But a promise of knights swearing by their swords

SO...

I won't let you hide in your castle or shell
I will punish you and send you straight to the hell
but oh, well...
If I still love you? you never can tell...

Author's Note

Tell Me wat u think

Reviews

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

yeah//////

[Dark Angel]

Contradicting much? "Yes, i'm happy to be finally free
To tell the lies, and there were three" Doesn't that mean what follows are lies?

[Cherry Blossom]

wow love into a war love it

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great start, I like the, first second and third format, overall good job well done.

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Awesum :)

[loowzerX]

awesome

[David W Moore III]

Very nice use of sarcasm to really stress your point. Even guys feel like tgat sometimes after a bad girl initiated breakup (well... Not the knight part)
great poem

[Caitlynxoxo]

Loved this :) perfect example of what girls go through on a day to day basis. Thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Marshall Hanson]

It's good. I like the visuals I got while reading it. Keep up the great work.

[Forever Mine]

love it !!