Last Words

Last Words

A Poem by Lanky

Write the words upon the wall
the forgotten poets final piece
tragic is, the poets fall
in which his heart did finally cease
Those most melancholy of words
which still linger and haunt us all

"live let live, let love, let die
from birth to the last rattling breath
I was a writer since my first cries
so here are the words i leave at my death
Forget me, for i am gone
but keep beauty alive
let stories, poems and play survive
cherish them for what they are
An escape from the wretched scars
that haunt the writers mind" 

And as he exhaled his last breath
he succumbed to the darkness and the death
and the poet was no more.

© 2010 Lanky


Author's Note

Lanky
it was written in like 10 minutes, i know the rhyme scheme isn't constant... any suggestions would be lovely

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this is wonderful.. awesome, insanely great.. keep writing Lanky you will be another great

Posted 13 Years Ago


I wouldn't change a thing man. Well written piece.
cheers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Forget me, for i am gone
but keep beauty alive
let stories, poems and play survive
cherish them for what they are
An escape from the wretched scars
that haunt the writers mind"

OUTSTANDING!!!! I like this alot. You are GOOD, I like the words you have to say. This is really a well written inspirational piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Lanky
Lanky

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