Vinegar Poison

Vinegar Poison

A Poem by LanternBounty

Bring it on hater.


You hate me when you don't even know.

Know the pain I'm really in.

Miss. Vinegar come try to get me!

I'm sure you'll never win.


Your poisonous attitude you spread,

Has no avail to my rock hard support wall.

They stay right by my side.

And make sure I don't fall.


I'm not some whimp as you'll soon see.

Bring it on! I'll fight to the end.

You'll never be able to hurt me and,

It's your mistake, I could've been your friend.


Writting is my escape so,

Don't laugh as I jot these words to the page.

I'm not a reveng seeker but,

as I've said before, don't release a monster's rage.


Your hateful words add fuel to the fire.

Unleash the beast most haven't seen in a while.

I have the upper hand in this online war.

I'll smack off your mocking smile.

© 2011 LanternBounty

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Author's Note

Written to a certain hater named: themorbidmonkey.

If you want to mess with the bull, you'll get the horns. I'm not going to stop writting or change for you!

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You go, girl!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I think we've seen the point taken. No one and I mean NO ONE should hate on anothers writing. If you do so. Why ? What satisfaction do you get from it ?
I believe you, ObsidianGlitter, are a great writer. A painter of words. They shouldn't be trying to tear you down.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on August 13, 2011
Last Updated on August 13, 2011




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