Myth

Though forever seemed so far away

A promise that we both chose

We'd follow the rules that life demands

And see how far it goes

To live on love, our only plan

How could we go wrong?

As each day passed we grew apart

Forever's not that long

A million kisses gone to waste

The product of a lie

Love's a gift that's made to last

It's not supposed to die

We tried our best to see it through

To rewrite history

But now each time they write of love

It won't mention you and me

Though legend we were meant to be

We'll ever be remembered with

The likes of Romeo and Juliet

Forever just a myth

Reviews

[Corset]

Did the fat lady sing Whiskurz :( This is very sweet and romantic, but sad in the way that love dies sometimes. Beautiful poetry Whisk well done :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautifully written, tragic in essence. The loss of love is so difficult to deal with. I love the story woven in this poem.. keeps me wanting to read more. I also love your rhyme and rhythm. Very well done.

[Serenity Faith]

Heartbreakingly beautiful.

[AWickedMoon]

Great poem. Very touching.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you for your kind words.....Whisk

[Annabelle Lee]

Just stopped by to visit an old friend, Your work is still as good as ever, Whisk. Beautifully done

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend....It's good to see you again......Whisk